Well, the gender of the protaganist is up to the player, as they are allowed to choose whether they identify as male or female. Unfortunately, for the Immortal Justice series, I have chosen to keep the game strictly SFW, as I intend for it to be an entry-level game for anyone that is slightly interested in the furry fandom. One of my main thinking points behind this decision was that I didn't want any player to feel afraid to play around other people, or share the game with their friends. While it does hold slight images and themes of Romance, slight gore, peril, and violence, I am afraid that there will be NO NSFW in the Immortal Justice series. On the OTHER hand, there WILL be other games being produced that may hold nsfw themes, but with a different set of characters, and a different layout to the game. You can join my Discord server (link is in my last few recent update posts) for more updates on other games in development that may hold what you are looking for. Thank you for your interests and your questions!
Well on phone you didn't see the whole name of longer names of the new versions but I figured out what is new versions is and I tried again but because this was just ,,make sure I'm not stupid'' thing and yeah I wasn't wrong and I don't know this helps (or these are the main problem) but I got 2 error at this points
First: ATHENA?!
Second: Very well then. Goodbye.
(I obviously saved while tried to figure out what is the problem in chapter one but still cannot be located)
Okay. Here me out. Chapter 2 isn’t a standalone chapter. You don’t die. There’s more coming. All the choices you’ve made in the first and second chapters help lead to a conclusion in the third chapter. Trust me, the story’s not over, yet :)
OKAY GUYS! I have updated Chapter 1 of the game series! Chapter Two: Darkest Times, is set to come out in about a week to a week and a half! It's almost here, guys!
Hey guys, Apollyon here, I'm gonna be streaming (or at least in a VC) in my discord channel, answering a few questions that people may have about the game and it's development! Here's the link : https://discord.gg/7CHmVhA
Omg. Honestly when i first saw i was just like meh. But when i tried it omg it was fun as hell!! Hope chapter 2 gets released soon im so excited!! Good luck!
Hey Apollyon, I don't how to start with this comment. But I wanted to let you know that (so far) you've made an excellent job with this VN. I played the first chapter some days ago, and all I can say is that it hooked me almost immediately after 3 or 5 minutes. As I was playing, I noticed that it had some little mistakes on some dialogues, but it wasn't something serious and I still enjoyed it.
I don't know if the next chapter will come soon or not, but I'll be waiting patiently for it.
Hi! Thank you for your feedback! I am in fact working really hard to produce an updated version of Chapter 1, AS WELL as Chapter 2! Though, I feel like I wouldn't be doing the story justice if I didn't REALLY fine tune the story, as well as clean up those dialogue mistakes you had mentioned. Thank you for your review, and I cannot WAIT to release the second chapter!
Hello Apollyon, so I tried your game and I will give it 10/10, I see you are pretty busy with your real life job, So I want to wish u a good luck and I hope new chapter will be released soon.
I'm gonna be straight up honest with you, the game making process has been SLOW. I've coded through just about HALF of the game, and I've run into a few roadblocks. I've found that I cannot:
1-Truly get the episodic code to work. No matter what I do, I can't get the game to remember choices made in the PREVIOUS chapter playthrough. To fix this, I'm going to have to release Chapter 1 AND Chapter 2 again, as a WHOLE GAME. Which will not only have more BUGS to fix, but more SCRIPT to organize, and adapt.
2- Have all the artwork completely done for the REST of the game. I'm afraid that the artist that I had making the art has been unable to finish the art. This is 100% FINE! It is NOT the artist's fault, they have a LOT on their plate, right now. I will have to finish up the game's art now. So, that's gonna be a WHOLE LOT MORE TIME for production.
3- I now have an actual REAL LIFE JOB that I now work at BESIDES coding, so that will ALSO slow me down.
I'm so very sorry for this devastating news. I will continue to work on this game, as I see that a lot of people enjoy playing it, but I felt that I owed you all an apology for not having released Chapter 2. I'm not even sure if I can give you a definite TIME for when Chapter 2 is coming out, but I will still be working on getting it out as fast as possible!
Thank you for your patience, and I hope you all have an AMAZING day/night!
How are you all doing? This is Apollyon. Chapter 2 for this game has been in production for almost three weeks, now. I'm coming across a tiny predicament. In order for me to make the game episodic I have to release Chapter 1 AGAIN, with a TIIIINY bit of altered code, so that your choices in Chapter 1 will affect events in Chapter 2. So, WHEN I release Chapter 2, I will ALSO be releasing an updated version of Chapter 1 as well. Thank you all for your patience and support!
I DO have a question for you all. Feel free to comment your answer! All of these choices will have easter eggs for the full Immortal Justice lore! Would you like:
-A separate game with romanceable characters (Including Apollyon, Vurolis, and many, MANY more) -A platformer fighting game, for those who like intense action -A separate VN with a whole new storyboard, featuring an all new character "Kaneda"
-Just for Chapter 2 to come out as fast as possible.
I'm doing okay and I hope your doing well! ^-^ I think I would like #1 the most but I would be happy with either 1 or 3. I don't mind the wait for updates to come out :3
I really like the first chapter and I have some questions and ideas for the chapter 2 (I know you releasing and updated version of chapter 1) :
When we not ask about anything whit the door whit Appollyon and Athena die when we at the chapter 2 we going to have more options? Like :
What the?!?!!
I need to tell Appollyon right now!
(the the second option is only pops up when we know about the mysterious murderer thing)
But this is just a little detail that adds a little bit to the story
And you should create a hide option to get a better picture from the characters clothes (and in the romantic version this option will come more important)
I really love romantic version of this novel but I think you should have keep the story and add the content for EXAMPLE : we watch TV ALONE in the room but before you do that you have some options, like :
Invite Appollyon to watch TV (if you choose this option he don't invite you to go whit him and this chrome colored Nissan skyline )
Or
Search for Atheon what is he doing
Or
Invite Azora for TV
Or
Invite Vurolis for TV
(I think there is enough space on mobile to have FIFTH option)
if you not choose the Appolyon option he will come in and maybe in the wrong time UWU (he is knocking but you don't hear it because you are ,,busy'') this is not going to happen every romantic line but If you flirt back to Azora or you choose the ,, He is Appolyon and he is mine'' whit the ,, you look like a hottie'' you can early earn the kiss or when you get the time to say something about Athena clothing you have third option: ,,ask Atheon'' and whit inviting him is going to be YOUR time whit TV and him
All characters will be needed to featured in this version except Athena because he going alway early (or whit say good about his clothes and whenever she pops up for option you only click on those you can earn the kiss but nothing more)
But this is the just some ideas for this version (because English is not my language but I can speak it very well but whatever)
For the fighting platformer is sounds really interesting but I don't have ideas for that (except: Call of justice immortal warfare.... OK this is sound bad XD)
And the other story is sounds good but I need a base because I don't really think you can build up a house roof whitout pillars and base (if you know what I mean)
I hope the best for you!
-the person you created his account just for tell his ideas and experiences whit visual novels
Edit: I will create another account industrial furniture 2
Howdy! Thank you for the suggestions! However, when I'm talking about about a separate game with romanceable characters, I mean a whole SEPARATE GAME. New story, new characters (plus some old ones), new game art, and NEW choices to make when you're either dating, or even doing other things, where the player experience is 100 percent original. I don't plan for the Immortal Justice series to be romance-related. It is a thriller murder mystery. That is it. BUT. Once I'm done coding out chapter 2, I will PROBABLY release just the separate romance game. But, I have priority on finishing chapter 2 asap.
Only some old one character? I realy love everybody from the old ones and whit more characters it's just better
BTW:the default characters in the original game has really good character characteristics (fur colour, emotions, how they look and feel, talking) and that's why I love all of them
I forgot 2 thinks :
1. I forgot to say that you need to finish the default game because I love the default story too and I think you need to finish the original story, 2 story at the same time is a little bit difficult because 2 story line writing at the same time is a little bit difficult (it's just a recommendation I don't want to ,,command'' you to do that and do that it's just experiences and expectations, recommendations)
2. I will not create another account (if someone want to trolling whit Indrustrial Furniture 2)
And I tried to find some other choices and I only got one last option... Play as female. And I realised that.... You have the same choices wow
(I expected that so I don't mean: HoW sTuPiD aRe YoU!4!!4! It's just odd to hear same flirting from Vurolis and Azora but whit girl)
The original story how many chapters is going to have?
I don't need the 2. Chapter fast as f but at least I'm happy to hear about something
I don't like the clashed work (I hope Google translate is worked good at the clashed work word and means that what I want to mean)
Yep! I will be releasing an updated version of Chapter 1 WHEN I release Chapter 2. This Alpha version I put out was to test how WELL the game would do with an online audience. I'm working up Chapter 2's code, now. It should take about just another month of coding and getting things together before both the updated Chapter 1 AND chapter 2 are released!
Dear Apollyion Steel I have an idea on chapter 2, I would like to add that the player would be an ex military soldier who will investigate a murder of Athena (idk forgot her name xd) And I would add this, if player is female- She will be police officer, if player is male-He will be ex soldier.
Well, seeing that I already have about 90% of the REST of ALL chapters planned out with a solid lore line, that would be KINDA hard to fit in, but thanks for the suggestion! I'm glad that you are offering suggestions and fun little story additions!
So, I touched on this earlier, while I said I have ninety percent of the game planned, which is TRUE, I still have to CODE all of this. This includes quick time events, image appearances, character dialogue, screenplay, audioplay, and not to mention I have to make sure all the code WORKS together. It could be over two months. I'd say Chapter 2 is about...20 percent done. I still have to get the basic gameplay notes edited into the script. I'm really building a Visual Novel from scratch, here, so patience would be appreciated!
Chapter Two is in production. It might take a while to come out. Believe me, it is REALLY hard coding this game by myself, between school, work, behind-the-wheel training, AND sports. I would estimate around 2-3 months production. Sorry if that's a long wait. I will be releasing teasers of the new chapter, as well as other lore chunks and bits in relevance to the game and its story. Thanks for the comment and question!
I wanted to contact you about a certain problem I've been having recently with your X-70 model camera system. For the first few nights that I've had the system, everything was working perfectly. It gave me motion detection, infrared vision, and facial tracking, just like your company has advertised from the start. The problems started coming up when I was checking the cameras, and I had a error message pop up on my phone. The message read as follows: "Error: HstCnctErr." Now, I don't particularly know what that means, but I assume that it has something to do with maybe some faulty wiring, or maybe the main modem is broken. The errors started coming earlier this week. I would switch camera feeds from my phone, and the feeds would keep taking longer and longer to pop up on my screen. I once measured that it took nearly eleven seconds to switch between camera feeds. I would press the button to switch camera feeds, and the screen would go black for eleven whole seconds, before FINALLY popping up. I don't know if this is user error or not. For some reason, the user manual for these cameras came only in Chinese. I had to hire a professional translator to tell me what it meant, and even HE told me that the instructions were poorly written, and almost made NO sense.
I'm aware that errors can happen, but I wouldn't think that my cameras would already be dysfunctional a WEEK after installation.
For now, I am having an electrician study the cameras. We've found some very odd things within the cameras systems. For instance, why would there be a separate transponder piece that's disconnected from the main electronics board inside the cameras? We did some research, and found that the transmitter responsible for sending feeds to my phone and my security team's computer interface is found connected DIRECTLY to the main boards. So what's the deal with a separate transponder piece inside the cameras?
I eagerly await your response. I would like for my money to be considered well spent, considering the upcoming events I have planned.
Spoiler please don't read if you haven't played the game yet.
I have a question why does it say at the start of the game the clock was blinking 12:00 in red and later on when Jackson arrived you said the time was 11 in the morning?, I'm confused please explain? Also Jackson must be a great tailor to make a custom suit in 24 hours when other tailors take 2-4 weeks to make a custom suit.
So, to answer your question, when an alarm clock is BLINKING 12:00, that means that the power has gone out, and the clock is not showing the actual TIME that it really IS.
And for your question about Jackson and his skills....maybe there's a REASON that he was able to get it done so fast? What if there was a hidden story behind his fast service? What if me choosing to elaborate that he got the suit done so quickly...wasn't an accident?
Oh my goodness! I completely forgot! I am SO sorry. I'll get that up later tonight. If you don't see it up by 10:00 pm EST, just literally spam my discord (Apollyon Steel#3210). I am SO sorry I forgot, my schedule is all over the place! I'll get that up by tonight, one way or another!
I won't spam your discord because I know you are working hard on your project and have your own life ( and probobly because I don't have discord and don't know how to use it) but if I can wait for a month or 2 or 3 for an update of a game then I can wait for the old android version, and also good luck with you project.
So, there won't be any SERIOUSLY romantic situations in this story. I want this game to be as playable for ALL AGES as possible. Maybe in the future, I will code visual novels with more romantic scenes and topics, but I just was making this one as a thriller-mystery type. Thank you for asking!
Oh, do you have an OLDER Android? The android release I put out was for the NEWER Android models. I can release the build for the OLDER model tonight. If you have an Iphone, you will have to wait. I'm trying to commandeer an IOS release, because it is VERY confusing to try and release an IOS-compatible build from Ren'py. Thank you for leaving a comment! I'll work to fix it as soon as possible!
Just finished it. I enjoyed it, I look forward to Chapter 2. There were some spelling mistakes, but it didn't deter from the story so 5 stars from me. :)
Awww Thanks! I'm glad you like the game! I tried really hard to crack down on typos, but it's very hard (Ren'py doesn't offer grammatical correction assistance like MS Word or anything else). Chapter Two is a little ways off, but I hope I can keep up the pace with production!
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What gender is the protagonist and does it feature m/m nsfw?
Well, the gender of the protaganist is up to the player, as they are allowed to choose whether they identify as male or female. Unfortunately, for the Immortal Justice series, I have chosen to keep the game strictly SFW, as I intend for it to be an entry-level game for anyone that is slightly interested in the furry fandom. One of my main thinking points behind this decision was that I didn't want any player to feel afraid to play around other people, or share the game with their friends. While it does hold slight images and themes of Romance, slight gore, peril, and violence, I am afraid that there will be NO NSFW in the Immortal Justice series. On the OTHER hand, there WILL be other games being produced that may hold nsfw themes, but with a different set of characters, and a different layout to the game. You can join my Discord server (link is in my last few recent update posts) for more updates on other games in development that may hold what you are looking for. Thank you for your interests and your questions!
You need to allow access to storage on both chapters for it to work in settings
okay, so if you HAVE the updated 1.3 version of the first chapter, that means I have more to patch. I can get these updates done by Sunday/Monday!
Oh, and are you sure you have the correct android VERSION. There’s an older model android version, AND. a newer model version!
Well on phone you didn't see the whole name of longer names of the new versions but I figured out what is new versions is and I tried again but because this was just ,,make sure I'm not stupid'' thing and yeah I wasn't wrong and I don't know this helps (or these are the main problem) but I got 2 error at this points
First: ATHENA?!
Second: Very well then. Goodbye.
(I obviously saved while tried to figure out what is the problem in chapter one but still cannot be located)
I hope it helps to locate the files problem :)
Okay, I posted my response in the comments of the SECOND CHAPTER'S page. Go check it out :)
-Apollyon
You need to allow storage permissions allowed for both the apps for it to work properly, I found that works
(spoiler) (and other)
In the end of the 2nd chapter you die anyway bruh, I chose like EVERY SINGLE OPTION EVER and I still get hit in the head at the end. Bruh :(
Okay. Here me out. Chapter 2 isn’t a standalone chapter. You don’t die. There’s more coming. All the choices you’ve made in the first and second chapters help lead to a conclusion in the third chapter. Trust me, the story’s not over, yet :)
-Apollyon
oop, thanks for letting me know! I’ll get that fixed in a patch coming out prolly on Sunday!
How’s everyone liking the updated first chapter so far?
I like it
I like it but I got some bad news (android)
I found more than one (this is the first after chosen male and pick the name)
Okay...I can fix that. I've had multiple problems with the android release lol. I'll release the patch for chapter 1 and the new CHAPTER 2 tonight!
OKAY! The game has been updated! Thank you for your feedback!
OKAY GUYS! I have updated Chapter 1 of the game series! Chapter Two: Darkest Times, is set to come out in about a week to a week and a half! It's almost here, guys!
Hey guys, Apollyon here, I'm gonna be streaming (or at least in a VC) in my discord channel, answering a few questions that people may have about the game and it's development! Here's the link : https://discord.gg/7CHmVhA
How far away is chapter 2?
Sooo, I’m thinking late August, early September. Ran into a few speedbumps, but still goin strong!
😊
All I can say is, whhhhhyyyy!!! Why does this have only one chapter it good!!
Thanks 😅
we need more!
Don’t mind me y’all, just gonna
Looking good! I can't wait for the next build
Bro that was fire 🔥🔥🔥🔥 I can't wait!!
When is chapter 2 planned to release?
Hi! Sorry, I’ve been SUUUUPER busy! I’m THINKING I’ll be able to release the next chapter in the middle of August!
Im excited!
Omg. Honestly when i first saw i was just like meh. But when i tried it omg it was fun as hell!! Hope chapter 2 gets released soon im so excited!! Good luck!
Hey Apollyon, I don't how to start with this comment. But I wanted to let you know that (so far) you've made an excellent job with this VN. I played the first chapter some days ago, and all I can say is that it hooked me almost immediately after 3 or 5 minutes. As I was playing, I noticed that it had some little mistakes on some dialogues, but it wasn't something serious and I still enjoyed it.
I don't know if the next chapter will come soon or not, but I'll be waiting patiently for it.
Hi! Thank you for your feedback! I am in fact working really hard to produce an updated version of Chapter 1, AS WELL as Chapter 2! Though, I feel like I wouldn't be doing the story justice if I didn't REALLY fine tune the story, as well as clean up those dialogue mistakes you had mentioned. Thank you for your review, and I cannot WAIT to release the second chapter!
Hello Apollyon, so I tried your game and I will give it 10/10, I see you are pretty busy with your real life job, So I want to wish u a good luck and I hope new chapter will be released soon.
You need to make a discord my great Apollyon, I would join
I did, actually! Lemme get the link!
Okay, here:
https://discord.gg/FfwwFFJhgN
That's the Creative Art Den! It's the official server! (It's a LIIIITTLE dead.)
Hi, Guys! Apollyon, here.
Listen, we gotta talk.
I'm gonna be straight up honest with you, the game making process has been SLOW. I've coded through just about HALF of the game, and I've run into a few roadblocks. I've found that I cannot:
1-Truly get the episodic code to work. No matter what I do, I can't get the game to remember choices made in the PREVIOUS chapter playthrough. To fix this, I'm going to have to release Chapter 1 AND Chapter 2 again, as a WHOLE GAME. Which will not only have more BUGS to fix, but more SCRIPT to organize, and adapt.
2- Have all the artwork completely done for the REST of the game. I'm afraid that the artist that I had making the art has been unable to finish the art. This is 100% FINE! It is NOT the artist's fault, they have a LOT on their plate, right now. I will have to finish up the game's art now. So, that's gonna be a WHOLE LOT MORE TIME for production.
3- I now have an actual REAL LIFE JOB that I now work at BESIDES coding, so that will ALSO slow me down.
I'm so very sorry for this devastating news. I will continue to work on this game, as I see that a lot of people enjoy playing it, but I felt that I owed you all an apology for not having released Chapter 2. I'm not even sure if I can give you a definite TIME for when Chapter 2 is coming out, but I will still be working on getting it out as fast as possible!
Thank you for your patience, and I hope you all have an AMAZING day/night!
-Apollyon
Understand have a good day/night
Pretty sad... But good luck! I believe in you! :D
It's 100% fine ^-^
I hope that works out well and I hope your artist and you are doing well.
Honestly totally fine with playing through Chp 1 and 2 again.
Even if the progress does slow, as long as you yourself are doing fine and well then I'm happy :D
Understandable I don't want another Cyberpunk 2077
Hi Apollyon,
I liked playing the first chapter and I'm looking forward to play through chapter 2 (take all the time you need to finish it).
My real life job involve coding so if you need and want someone to help with the problems you encountered, I may be able to help you.
cant wait for the next update
Me either
How are you all doing? This is Apollyon. Chapter 2 for this game has been in production for almost three weeks, now. I'm coming across a tiny predicament. In order for me to make the game episodic I have to release Chapter 1 AGAIN, with a TIIIINY bit of altered code, so that your choices in Chapter 1 will affect events in Chapter 2. So, WHEN I release Chapter 2, I will ALSO be releasing an updated version of Chapter 1 as well. Thank you all for your patience and support!
I DO have a question for you all. Feel free to comment your answer! All of these choices will have easter eggs for the full Immortal Justice lore!
Would you like:
-A separate game with romanceable characters (Including Apollyon, Vurolis, and many, MANY more)
-A platformer fighting game, for those who like intense action
-A separate VN with a whole new storyboard, featuring an all new character "Kaneda"
-Just for Chapter 2 to come out as fast as possible.
Just for chapter 2 to come out as fast as possible since it is amazing
I'm doing okay and I hope your doing well! ^-^
I think I would like #1 the most but I would be happy with either 1 or 3.
I don't mind the wait for updates to come out :3
I would like for a "A separate game with romanceable characters (Including Apollyon, Vurolis, and many, MANY more)" Especially Apollyon!
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
You romantic 😏
I choose "A separate game with romanceable characters (Including Apollyon, Vurolis, and many, MANY more)" Especially Apollyon! Bc I like romance UwU
And add Azora pls in romance!
(spoilers ahead)
Hello Appollyon!
I really like the first chapter and I have some questions and ideas for the chapter 2 (I know you releasing and updated version of chapter 1) :
When we not ask about anything whit the door whit Appollyon and Athena die when we at the chapter 2 we going to have more options? Like :
What the?!?!!
I need to tell Appollyon right now!
(the the second option is only pops up when we know about the mysterious murderer thing)
But this is just a little detail that adds a little bit to the story
And you should create a hide option to get a better picture from the characters clothes (and in the romantic version this option will come more important)
I really love romantic version of this novel but I think you should have keep the story and add the content for EXAMPLE : we watch TV ALONE in the room but before you do that you have some options, like :
Invite Appollyon to watch TV (if you choose this option he don't invite you to go whit him and this chrome colored Nissan skyline )
Or
Search for Atheon what is he doing
Or
Invite Azora for TV
Or
Invite Vurolis for TV
(I think there is enough space on mobile to have FIFTH option)
if you not choose the Appolyon option he will come in and maybe in the wrong time UWU (he is knocking but you don't hear it because you are ,,busy'') this is not going to happen every romantic line but If you flirt back to Azora or you choose the ,, He is Appolyon and he is mine'' whit the ,, you look like a hottie'' you can early earn the kiss or when you get the time to say something about Athena clothing you have third option: ,,ask Atheon'' and whit inviting him is going to be YOUR time whit TV and him
All characters will be needed to featured in this version except Athena because he going alway early (or whit say good about his clothes and whenever she pops up for option you only click on those you can earn the kiss but nothing more)
But this is the just some ideas for this version (because English is not my language but I can speak it very well but whatever)
For the fighting platformer is sounds really interesting but I don't have ideas for that (except: Call of justice immortal warfare.... OK this is sound bad XD)
And the other story is sounds good but I need a base because I don't really think you can build up a house roof whitout pillars and base (if you know what I mean)
I hope the best for you!
-the person you created his account just for tell his ideas and experiences whit visual novels
Edit: I will create another account industrial furniture 2
Howdy! Thank you for the suggestions! However, when I'm talking about about a separate game with romanceable characters, I mean a whole SEPARATE GAME. New story, new characters (plus some old ones), new game art, and NEW choices to make when you're either dating, or even
doing other things, where the player experience is 100 percent original. I don't plan for the Immortal Justice series to be romance-related. It is a thriller murder mystery. That is it. BUT. Once I'm done coding out chapter 2, I will PROBABLY release just the separate romance game. But, I have priority on finishing chapter 2 asap.Hello there!
Only some old one character? I realy love everybody from the old ones and whit more characters it's just better
BTW:the default characters in the original game has really good character characteristics (fur colour, emotions, how they look and feel, talking) and that's why I love all of them
I forgot 2 thinks :
1. I forgot to say that you need to finish the default game because I love the default story too and I think you need to finish the original story, 2 story at the same time is a little bit difficult because 2 story line writing at the same time is a little bit difficult (it's just a recommendation I don't want to ,,command'' you to do that and do that it's just experiences and expectations, recommendations)
2. I will not create another account (if someone want to trolling whit Indrustrial Furniture 2)
And I tried to find some other choices and I only got one last option... Play as female. And I realised that.... You have the same choices wow
(I expected that so I don't mean: HoW sTuPiD aRe YoU!4!!4! It's just odd to hear same flirting from Vurolis and Azora but whit girl)
The original story how many chapters is going to have?
I don't need the 2. Chapter fast as f but at least I'm happy to hear about something
I don't like the clashed work (I hope Google translate is worked good at the clashed work word and means that what I want to mean)
Yep! I will be releasing an updated version of Chapter 1 WHEN I release Chapter 2. This Alpha version I put out was to test how WELL the game would do with an online audience. I'm working up Chapter 2's code, now. It should take about just another month of coding and getting things together before both the updated Chapter 1 AND chapter 2 are released!
Can't wait for chapter 2, still playing it over again and still love it. Thank you Apollyon Steel for this good game.☺
Awww, thanks! Make sure you try and get some story for the lore of the game, it'll help you make wise choices in the future!
Dear Apollyion Steel I have an idea on chapter 2, I would like to add that the player would be an ex military soldier who will investigate a murder of Athena (idk forgot her name xd) And I would add this, if player is female- She will be police officer, if player is male-He will be ex soldier.
Hope you like my Idea. XD
Well, seeing that I already have about 90% of the REST of ALL chapters planned out with a solid lore line, that would be KINDA hard to fit in, but thanks for the suggestion! I'm glad that you are offering suggestions and fun little story additions!
Thank you Appolyon Steel I appreciate it!
When will chapter 2 released? Love the game XD
So, I touched on this earlier, while I said I have ninety percent of the game planned, which is TRUE, I still have to CODE all of this. This includes quick time events, image appearances, character dialogue, screenplay, audioplay, and not to mention I have to make sure all the code WORKS together. It could be over two months. I'd say Chapter 2 is about...20 percent done. I still have to get the basic gameplay notes edited into the script. I'm really building a Visual Novel from scratch, here, so patience would be appreciated!
When is the next update or chapter coming out
Chapter Two is in production. It might take a while to come out. Believe me, it is REALLY hard coding this game by myself, between school, work, behind-the-wheel training, AND sports. I would estimate around 2-3 months production. Sorry if that's a long wait. I will be releasing teasers of the new chapter, as well as other lore chunks and bits in relevance to the game and its story. Thanks for the comment and question!
It's worth the waiting
Oh yeah. And there's a discord server for the game.
It's called The Creative Art Den.
You can catch updates on the game, as well as share your own art and writing!
Here is the link:
https://discord.gg/7CHmVhA
Go join, it's a fun server!
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-Apollyon Steel
Played it again :<
I still love it ^-^
I'm glad you do!
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Dear MyTek Inc:
I wanted to contact you about a certain problem I've been having recently with your X-70 model camera system. For the first few nights that I've had the system, everything was working perfectly. It gave me motion detection, infrared vision, and facial tracking, just like your company has advertised from the start. The problems started coming up when I was checking the cameras, and I had a error message pop up on my phone. The message read as follows: "Error: HstCnctErr." Now, I don't particularly know what that means, but I assume that it has something to do with maybe some faulty wiring, or maybe the main modem is broken. The errors started coming earlier this week. I would switch camera feeds from my phone, and the feeds would keep taking longer and longer to pop up on my screen. I once measured that it took nearly eleven seconds to switch between camera feeds. I would press the button to switch camera feeds, and the screen would go black for eleven whole seconds, before FINALLY popping up. I don't know if this is user error or not. For some reason, the user manual for these cameras came only in Chinese. I had to hire a professional translator to tell me what it meant, and even HE told me that the instructions were poorly written, and almost made NO sense.
I'm aware that errors can happen, but I wouldn't think that my cameras would already be dysfunctional a WEEK after installation.
For now, I am having an electrician study the cameras. We've found some very odd things within the cameras systems. For instance, why would there be a separate transponder piece that's disconnected from the main electronics board inside the cameras? We did some research, and found that the transmitter responsible for sending feeds to my phone and my security team's computer interface is found connected DIRECTLY to the main boards. So what's the deal with a separate transponder piece inside the cameras?
I eagerly await your response. I would like for my money to be considered well spent, considering the upcoming events I have planned.
Your partner in business,
-Apollyon E. Steel
Okey this got me interested.
What, you thought this was some no-lore filler Chapter? Oh, nononono, there's hidden plot points in EVERY SECOND of gameplay.
The trick is-
You gotta LOOK for it.
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I hope upgrade will be soon. Great game!
Spoiler please don't read if you haven't played the game yet.
I have a question why does it say at the start of the game the clock was blinking 12:00 in red and later on when Jackson arrived you said the time was 11 in the morning?, I'm confused please explain? Also Jackson must be a great tailor to make a custom suit in 24 hours when other tailors take 2-4 weeks to make a custom suit.
So, to answer your question, when an alarm clock is BLINKING 12:00, that means that the power has gone out, and the clock is not showing the actual TIME that it really IS.
And for your question about Jackson and his skills....maybe there's a REASON that he was able to get it done so fast? What if there was a hidden story behind his fast service? What if me choosing to elaborate that he got the suit done so quickly...wasn't an accident?
Muahhahaha
-Apollyon
mmaagggiiicccc
I wonder when the download button for the older androids are coming.
Oh my goodness! I completely forgot! I am SO sorry. I'll get that up later tonight. If you don't see it up by 10:00 pm EST, just literally spam my discord (Apollyon Steel#3210). I am SO sorry I forgot, my schedule is all over the place! I'll get that up by tonight, one way or another!
I won't spam your discord because I know you are working hard on your project and have your own life ( and probobly because I don't have discord and don't know how to use it) but if I can wait for a month or 2 or 3 for an update of a game then I can wait for the old android version, and also good luck with you project.
Tysm! The version for the old Android is uploading right now
Will there be romancable characters or is this purely a mystery type game?
So, there won't be any SERIOUSLY romantic situations in this story. I want this game to be as playable for ALL AGES as possible. Maybe in the future, I will code visual novels with more romantic scenes and topics, but I just was making this one as a thriller-mystery type. Thank you for asking!
Why does it say that it is incompatible on my phone?
Oh, do you have an OLDER Android? The android release I put out was for the NEWER Android models. I can release the build for the OLDER model tonight. If you have an Iphone, you will have to wait. I'm trying to commandeer an IOS release, because it is VERY confusing to try and release an IOS-compatible build from Ren'py. Thank you for leaving a comment! I'll work to fix it as soon as possible!
Cool
furries?
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Just finished it. I enjoyed it, I look forward to Chapter 2. There were some spelling mistakes, but it didn't deter from the story so 5 stars from me. :)
Awww Thanks! I'm glad you like the game! I tried really hard to crack down on typos, but it's very hard (Ren'py doesn't offer grammatical correction assistance like MS Word or anything else). Chapter Two is a little ways off, but I hope I can keep up the pace with production!
-Apollyon Steel
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